Mm, finally getting somewhere!
First pages are so intimidating. I had lots of fun doodling all the different hairstyles.
Gotta fix the smoke. There aren’t supposed to be smoke holes on the roof because the roof would fall down, and rain could fall in and extinguish the fire. The smoke should come out from the sides of the house. Must get really smoky in there.
I made the speech bubbles with the path tool on Photoshop. I might not do that for the final draft. I might draw them in Corel Painter Essentials with some ink brush.
Young Ulfleif is going to show up in the next page!